Got a photo critiqued by a Master of The Arcanum

One of my favorite photographers is starting up a new video show next week where masters of The Arcanum critique photos of their apprentices and others and was drumming up support for the show but asking his viewers/followers to post a photo of theirs to be critiqued.

So I submitted one of mine and they decided to do the critique of it in their “Live Critiques for the New Show Launch Day!” video

I’m the second photo in the video around the 3:27 min mark.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IgeR2qhK8c8&feature=youtu.be

I’d be interested in your thoughts. Do you agree with Mason?

Here is the photo that I submitted and below that is the original un edited version

Colors of the Pool
Colors of the Pool Submitted for Critique
Color of the Pool Original
Color of the Pool Original